Question 5
(1) When I moved to New York City ten months ago to go to college, it was mainly my lack of self-confidence that made it hard to adjust to my new surroundings. (2) I'm a country kid from rural Texas. (3) 1 grew up on a ranch on the prairie. (4) I was used to wide-open spaces and peace and quiet, and most of my friends were of Mexican descent like me. (5) Fortunately, I've come to enjoy living in the city, but for a long time I felt overwhelmed and out of place.
(6) Early on for example my anxiety about getting lost was so bad that I was even scared to go for a walk or to take a bus or the subway. (7) I feared that I might have to ask a stranger for directions and that that person might not speak one of the languages I do, (8) My irrational fears went on and on.
(9) That's why I was relieved when, after many hours of reflection, I finally realized that it was my attitude and not the city that were making me miserable. (10) I adopted a new outlook and began to develop friendships and explore the city with my new companions. (11) Together we've attended many of the local festivals that are held from time to time to celebrate a holiday, a historic event, or a culture. (12) I've enjoyed the diversity here, and wanting to learn as much as I can about the different sorts of people who live here. (13) It has also been great to meet so many other people who are bilingual in Spanish and English.
(14) Being able to meet others who speak Spanish has definitely helped me. (15) Actually, there's not much about living here that intimidates me anymore, and I've even gotten used to the noise. (16) The city never sleeps, as they say, and day or night there are always hundreds of people out and about on the streets. (17) Now I wonder whether I'll be able to fall asleep when I go back to Texas, where the only noise I'll hear at night is lowing of the cattle.
Which is the best version of the underlined portion of sentence 12 (reproduced below)?
I've enjoyed the diversity here, and wanting to learn as much as I can about the different sorts of people who live here.
Rationale
I've enjoyed the diversity here, and I also wanted to learn as much as I can about the different sorts of people who live here.
This choice correctly connects the two clauses with a coordinating conjunction, ensuring grammatical coherence while expressing the writer's desire to learn about the city's diversity.
A) (as it is now)
The original phrasing "wanting to learn" creates a grammatical error known as a sentence fragment. It lacks a subject and verb for the second clause, making it unclear and incomplete in conveying the writer's intention.
B) here and had been wanting
This option introduces a past perfect tense "had been wanting," which is unnecessary and awkward in context. The use of past perfect implies an action that was completed before another past action, which does not fit the current narrative about ongoing experiences in the city.
D) here, and I want
While this choice is grammatically correct, it changes the tense of "want" to present, which slightly alters the meaning. The original text conveys a sense of ongoing desire ("wanting") rather than a simple present wish, making it less effective in reflecting the author's ongoing engagement with the city's diversity.
Conclusion
The best choice maintains grammatical integrity and accurately reflects the ongoing desire to learn about the diverse population of the city. Option C effectively combines the two ideas, showing both enjoyment of diversity and a proactive interest in understanding it, which captures the essence of the author's experience in New York City.