Question 3
(1) According to urban legend, the potato chip was accidentally invented in 1853 by an irritated chef. (2) He was George Crum, the son of an African-American father and Native-American mother, who was working as a chef one summer in Saratoga Springs, New York. (3) A customer in the restaurant where Crum worked complained that his French-fried potatoes were too thick and soft and sent them back to the kitchen. (4) To teach the customer a lesson, Crum allegedly sliced a new batch of potatoes as thinly as he possibly could, fried the slices until they were hard and crunchy, and then dousing them with salt. (5) But far from being angry, the customer ended up loving the new dish, and thus the potato chip was born. (6) Saratoga Springs was famous at the time for its natural hot springs, some of which are still in operation today. (7) Soon the potato chips, originally known as "Saratoga chips" or "potato crunches," became very popular. (8) With the profits he'd made, Crum opened his own restaurant, where every table had its own basket of chips. (9) The chips remained a local delicacy until the Prohibition era. (10) This is when an entrepreneur named Herman Lay popularized the product throughout the Southeastern United States. (11) However, not everyone believes that George Crum was the inventor of the potato chip. (12) These skeptics say that certain cookbooks from the early 1800s, such as William Kitchiner's The Cook's Oracle and N.K.M. Lee's The Cook's Own Book, described recipes for very similar potato dishes- the only difference is that they weren't called "potato chips."
What is the best revision of the underlined portion of sentence 4 (reproduced below)? To teach the customer a lesson, Crum allegedly sliced a new batch of potatoes as thinly as he possibly could, fried the slices until they were hard and crunchy, and then dousing them with salt.
Rationale
and then doused
Using "and then doused" maintains a parallel structure with the preceding verbs in the list, which enhances clarity and flow. This concise phrasing effectively conveys the sequence of actions without unnecessary words.
A) and then he doused
This option introduces the subject "he," which is unnecessary and disrupts the parallel structure established by the earlier verbs. The added word makes the sentence less concise and does not align with the rhythm of the previous actions.
B) and then doused
This choice preserves the list's parallelism by omitting unnecessary subjects, maintaining a consistent verb form throughout. It succinctly conveys the sequence of actions taken by Crum, making the sentence clearer and more engaging.
C) doused them
While "doused them" is grammatically correct, it alters the sentence's structure by removing the conjunction "and then." This changes the flow and creates a less cohesive list of actions, making it less effective in conveying the sequence of events.
D) and finally dousing
This option introduces an awkward phrasing that mixes verb forms by using "dousing" instead of a past tense verb to match the preceding actions. It disrupts the parallel structure and creates inconsistency in the sentence's rhythm.
Conclusion
The best revision, "and then doused," maintains the parallel structure and clarity of the original sentence while presenting a clear sequence of actions. This enhances readability and comprehension, making it the most effective choice among the options provided. The focus on maintaining verb consistency in lists is crucial for effective writing.