Question 3
According to urban legend, the potato chip was accidentally invented in 1853 by an irritated chef. He was George Crum, the son of an African-American father and Native-American mother, who was working as a chef one summer in Saratoga Springs, New York. A customer in the restaurant where Crum worked complained that his French-fried potatoes were too thick and soft and sent them back to the kitchen. To teach the customer a lesson, Crum allegedly sliced a new batch of potatoes as thinly as he possibly could, fried the slices until they were hard and crunchy, and then doused them with salt. But far from being angry, the customer ended up loving the new dish, and thus the potato chip was born! Saratoga Springs was famous at the time for its natural hot springs, some of which are still in operation today. Soon the potato chips, originally known as 'Saratoga chips' or 'potato crunches,' became very popular. With the profits he'd made, Crum opened his own restaurant, where every table had its own basket of chips. The chips remained a local delicacy until the Prohibition era. This is when an entrepreneur named Herman Lay popularized the product throughout the Southeastern United States. However, not everyone believes that George Crum was the inventor of the potato chip. These skeptics say that certain cookbooks from the early 1800s, such as William Kitchiner's The Cook's Oracle and N.K.M. Lee's The Cook's Own Book, described recipes for very similar potato dishes-the only difference is that they weren't called 'potato chips.'
Which of the following is the best version of the underlined portion of sentence 11: 'By the end of the 1700s, street lighting in cities became more common, people stayed up later, and writers mentioning first and second sleep less and less'?
Rationale
By the end of the 1700s, street lighting in cities became more common, people stayed up later, and writers mentioned.
This version maintains parallel structure and clarity, making it the most grammatically correct choice. It uses the past tense consistently throughout, effectively conveying the historical context.
A) (as it is now)
This option does not provide a clear alternative to the original text, and it lacks the necessary grammatical adjustments. As it stands, it fails to maintain a coherent structure and does not enhance the sentence's clarity.
B) became more common, people staying up later, and writers mentioned
While this option presents a similar idea, it disrupts the parallel construction with "people staying up later," which shifts from the past tense to a gerund form. This inconsistency leads to a lack of fluidity and clarity in the sentence.
C) becoming more common, people staying up later, and writers mentioned
This choice introduces the gerund "becoming," which again disrupts the parallelism and uniform past tense structure established in the other clauses. This inconsistency detracts from the sentence's effectiveness and clarity.
D) became more common, people stayed up later, and writers mentioned
This version maintains a consistent past tense across all parts of the sentence, ensuring clarity and coherence. It effectively communicates the historical shift in sleep patterns and societal behaviors during that time.
Conclusion
The best option for the underlined portion is D, as it maintains a uniform tense and parallel structure, enhancing the overall readability of the sentence. The other choices introduce inconsistencies in tense or structure, which detracts from the clarity and effectiveness of the statement regarding historical changes in sleep patterns.