In context, which of the following is the best way to revise and combine sentences 9 and 10 (reproduced below)? These robots are equipped with cameras and video screens. The robots allow the home-bound workers to attend meetings and interact more personally with their coworkers.
Equipped with cameras and video screens, these robots allow the home-bound workers to attend meetings and interact more personally with their coworkers.
This revision effectively combines the two sentences by using a participial phrase, which streamlines the sentence structure and maintains clarity. The phrase "Equipped with cameras and video screens" provides essential information about the robots while seamlessly connecting to their function.
This option employs a more complex structure with "while being," which can make the sentence unnecessarily verbose. It does not convey the information as efficiently as the correct answer.
While this choice correctly combines the ideas, the use of "moreover" creates a sense of additional information rather than a cohesive connection. The structure is also less concise than option C.
This option introduces unnecessary complexity by starting with an "in order to" clause, which lengthens the sentence without adding significant meaning. It detracts from the direct and efficient statement of the robots' capabilities.
The best revision combines clarity and conciseness, presenting the information in a straightforward manner. Option C effectively conveys that the robots' features directly enable their function for home-bound workers, making it the most effective choice. The other options, while grammatically correct, either complicate the structure or dilute the intended message.
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