The revision of the sentence shown best reflects a change in word choice that demonstrates which of the following characteristics of formal academic writing?

Concrete language refers to specific and vivid descriptions rather than vague or abstract terms. While employing concrete language is beneficial in formal writing, the question focuses on the avoidance of clichés, which does not necessarily correlate with the specificity of language. Therefore, this choice does not directly address the characteristic highlighted in the revised sentence.

The use of passive voice can create a sense of objectivity and formality in academic writing; however, it is not inherently related to the avoidance of clichés. This choice emphasizes grammatical structure rather than the quality of word choice, making it irrelevant to the specific characteristic being assessed in the question.

Euphemisms are mild or indirect expressions used to soften the impact of difficult topics. While replacing euphemisms can enhance clarity, it does not specifically relate to avoiding clichés. The revised sentence focuses on refreshing language and originality, which is distinct from the use of euphemistic expressions.